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Nightmares

Nightmares raging,
through the night.
Filling your head,
with horrible thoughts.
Unrestrained imagery,
of death and blood.
A chill you cannot,
shake off.
Running in your sleep,
away from the demons.
Little do you know it's your fault.
You unleashed your inner demons.

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  • RedAquarius
    April 20

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    You have an excess of commas, I'd suggest removing commas from L1, 3, 5, 7, and 9. They are not needed, in my opinion. Good dark tone.

    I appreciate your creativity!


  • Eevie
    April 8
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    very scary..interesting tho


  • hisaddiction
    April 8
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    Hah! I love this...wow, great job!