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A void...

i've lost something
my sight...
something i've used so much

yet it's gone
i can see you
yet your a void of some kind
just to me

everyday i wonder
why?
just why?

why are you a void?
when everyone else is so clear?

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  • songstress80
    August 16

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    goodie, I get to be the first to comment on this poem!

    such an interesting write! it's true though. sometimes we can see people so clearly and know them so well, while others are a complete mystery to us. very well written and very intriging ...I believe I misspelled that word...sorry :0( but like I said you have a nice piece here. nicely done!