hasn't heard
a whip crack
is a leader
of the pack
he has never felt
a human hand
or a body
of a man
free to roam
our beautiful land
rolls in dirt
then on sand
a ring cannot keep
this wild stallion
he will not bare
a gold medallion
if he breaks
from his pack
wild horses
will come running
to follow his tracks
Author notes
Picture photographed by Jeff Swan....
A contest entry
- AND ALL THE WILD HORSES WILL COME RUNNINGl by Swan song.
700 points, ended April 11, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful...truly beautiful you really captured me there!! well I love horses so you got it 10/10 awesome job!!
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This is a wonderful write about wild horses. They are truly beautiful creatures. Great write and I hope that you do well in your contests. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Wonderful write, hon.. Would that they all could be free to roam where they will.. Well done..
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well spun I love the way your poem flowed with rhyme and the short lines seemed to add to the tone of the poem Very well done and thank you for entering
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Beautiful! Wild horses should run free.
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'he has never felt a human hand or a body of a man' .. I love how 'free and wild' you've described the wild horses.
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a beautiful write G good luck in the contestM
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