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Morning Whispers

I relax in an early morning shroud of anonymity

for the rays of dawn are still too weak to see.

The mountain stands so proud in the distance,

as clouds lazily meander through the still dark sky.

Early birds, still unseen, can be heard calling

of the activity that will be coming to this day.

Peace fills my being in this tranquil dusky setting.

For this is the time when I can just be still

and listen as the morning whispers to my soul.

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  • debilynn gold member
    June 7

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    what a beautiful poem! IT CAPTIVATES THE READER clear til the end. . imagery here is outstanding! thank you for sharing your amazing talent . keep writing! God bless you always


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    June 3

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    I truly love this! Its so peaceful. You paint such a calm heartfilled place. Your write most beautifully! Thank You!


  • anaisnais
    June 1

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    How delightful to be at one with nature, you capture the essence of daybreak beautifully in this write, well done. Anna-Marie.

  • goalsv
    April 9

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    Very calming and peacful poem. A beautiful way to show the joy of the morning as it wakes up the day. Your talent really shines here as your heart pours out over the page and we get a little look inside.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 8

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    A moment of stillness to listen as the world wakes. What wonderful images this conjures up for me, and warms damp mornings.

    I wonder how many different songs the early birds sing getting ready for the day. Hundreds I imagine, to the point of relentless chattering. Imagine!

    Thank you for submitting this poem in the contest. I enjoyed your words very much. ~Pamela


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 8

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    BEAUTIFULLY SERENE!!

    That is my favorite time of day also, the moment before the sun rises yet the mornng birds are singing and all is quiet.


  • Denerica
    April 8

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    Beautiful, even a coudy day has purpose, sets our emotions in high gear. Wonderful write. Blessings.


  • nilav
    April 8
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    the beauty and calmness of nature well expressed which enrich our senses....


  • ModernDionysis
    April 8
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    A lovely, atmospheric poem, with a real joy of nature and of life. Thank you.


  • sharptooth
    April 8

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    this poem made me want to go outside with all the gorgeous imagery you have in here.

    except it's snowing outside where i live. wtf, it's april.

    great write


  • Floorboards
    April 8

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    Lovely poem, one we can all relate to I think. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Floorboards.


  • Sgt B
    April 8

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    Very relaxing

    I could almost smell the morning dew. Very tranquil write my friend. Very fitting for an early morning read. I enjoyed your imagery as well.
    Great job & Good luck in the contest.

    ~Ron~

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