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Each day

Each morning,
when im awaking
I hear the voices,
and I start shaking

I'm lost and alone,
got no where to call home
Everyone treating me like I'm invisible,
I need to know that I can live peaceful.

When I walk down the hall
people are usually staring
but I'm looking there way
not really caring.

Voices scream
"Help me! I'm trapped in insanity!"
Whats there to do but to wait and see,
what my true destiny may be.


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  • Denerica
    April 8

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    You are more precious than rubies, the apple of His eye, I feel the emotion, the closed inside, wanting to reach out, be reached out to, brilliant write. Blessings.