Goodbye my friend
I will miss you very much
Not a day will pass that I will not think of you
Through good times and bad
We made the best out of it and had a blast
All the times you were sad I was there
And when ever I was sad
You would always care
All our pain we would always share
We all make mistakes
And we were no different
Life for us was never a piece of cake
But we always got through it
We always made it through
What makes this time any different
You are not here to make me smile
You promised me you would nevr make me cry
Yet look at my face
Look at my eyes
Can you see the tears in them
That is all because of you
Because you chose to die
You chose to leave me here all alone
And now I cry so hard that it breaks my heart
So I'll say goodbye
For now
But I will always look up at the sky
And I will see you smiling and saying hi
Author notes
"Pixy Stix are my anti-drug"
"Help Me Feel Again"
R a y n e 1 3 3 1
Don't die live life
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Noticed one Typo...you are missing an "e" in the word never.
This poem is powerful as to the emotions you are feeling, but I am inclined to say you are being slightly unfair to you fallen friend; he didn't do this to you, he did this to himself. Sometimes life is too painful for a person, sometimes the game has to end. And while it is a beautiful testiment to your good heart that the loss hurts you, I beg you to try not to blaim him. Try instead to understand WHY he chose to leave, and perhaps it will bring you closer to serenity.
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First off i would like to thank you for your comment and ur help with that error.
Secondly, i don't blame him anymore... and he's alive i found out a few days ago and i spoke to him this morning i was angry at first but i forgave him and now we talk somewhat but it's something.
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Awww...it's so sad. With... I jus... What do I say to this? I mean, jus... Dang. So situational to my thoughts inside that I can't explain. I think this shows a lot of emotion. Good.
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This is so sad. I can relate to the feeling of loss. I had someone I loved kill himself as well, and I remember when I found out...he left a gaping hole in me...I am so glad you can write about this. In the end it will help you heal.
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The Pain of lost is the worse when everything reminds you of the one you lost and your sometimes not sure if there really gone like you half expect them to walk in to the room and give you a hug and/or start laughing and say got ya!! The void feels like it will never heal and you just want to pinch yourself to see if this is all real! It hard but you'll get through it Poetry is A wonderful outlet and this poem demonstrates it well!!
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This is a great write keep up the great work
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Death touches people in different ways. Very sad, yet beautiful thank you for entering my contest. Good Luck!
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This is so sad. I almost cried reading it. I know how hard it is to lose a friend to suicide. NOT easy and not funny. Something were going to have to live with for the rest of our life.
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This is so touching
This is something that is very touching and I wanted to cry.I do feel sorry for your lose but you are pushing through this and I admire you for that.I'm about to lose my aunt and I don't know if I could handle it in a way that seems so calm like you have.This is so great you really did a wonderful job on it.Good Luck in this contest. -
I can see this is an emotional write
I also would never make fun of you or your friend. Because this write is so very close to you. I can tell. It is soooo well written.. that I can feel the tears you are crying. I think this is a very sad write indeed but a lot of us have been through just what you have... and you have dealt well with this... for you have no anger at your friend for leaving you. No instead you think of your friend as smiling down from heaven at you... wishing you well. An excellent write. Good job at writing how you feel. -
Nicely written. Good luck, and thanks for entering !
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So I'll say goodbye
For now
But I will always look up at the sky
And I will see you smiling and saying hi
I am so sorry for your loss. Bless you for trying to put some sun on such a tragic situation, and for looking your feelings square in the face.
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Sad and beautiful tribute
suicide does seem to be an injustice to those left behind...but having previously suffered from suicidal ideation, I can share then I only wanted to end my suffering once and for all, and did not want to hurt others, but could no longer tolerate life in excruciating pain. Prayers and love to you suffering soul for comfort in the wake of your tragic loss. -
Sweet and innocent, I know this pain all too well. Thank you for sharing.
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Emotional
This is a very nice write. Very full of emotion. A true tear jerker. Nice job and good luck! -
I'm speechless! And I have goosebumps! This is exactly the sort of emotion I am looking for. I actually came very close to tears! This is brilliant! Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck.
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Never a good thing when someone you love dies, even less so when they choose to, it's even worse. I grieve with you is the best I can offer. Other than to say, this is a well done, heartfelt ode to a fallen friend. Peace be with you.
Write On!
jIM
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I am terribly sorry for your loss. This is a wonderful tribute indeed.
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Awww
this is soo sad and very good. u made me cry
i'm sorry he left u.. if u need someone to talk to, i'm here. i've lost a lot of close ppl to me. i know how it feels... great write once again!
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awww this is so sad, Im deeply sorry for your loss, Must have been hard, You are a very talented writer, Keep it up.
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This is so sad. I almost cried reading it. I know how hard it is to lose a friend to suicide. NOT easy and not funny. Something were going to have to live with for the rest of our life.
Last sentece you have made a spelling error.
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