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"songs"

notes
lingering
upon the ears

establishing themselves
in the minds,

enduring;

forever
to be remembered
in the enticing role play
of emotions

a whispering earworm,
musical high.

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  • hisaddiction
    April 18
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    beautifully written

    this piece is very soft..i loved it.