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Sunrise of an Angel

Sharing in your sorrow, of the boy we do adore,
staring into the sunsets you see no more,
rain feels lighter,
the stars seem so much brighter,
how can this be,
that you I no longer can see.

My last words to you were:

See-you my adopted boy....Have Fun,
little did I know, you would never see the rising sun.

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  • amberrr.
    June 23
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    I'm sorry, this poem is really strong. It really expresses your feelings in one poem, i like it.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 16
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    Sad words penned here..My boy is adopted...I feel the pain...