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Dear Brother

The summer wind in his hair,
as he sat on a shadow.
One of the best motorcycles,
in the world I think.

His smile so bringht,
A happy day imprinnted,
forever in time.
Forever in our minds.

LIke a big brother he helped,
around the house.
Yet he also helped,
in way's he would never know.

I was so young,
6 or 7 at the time.
Yet he spoke to me,
As an adult, an equal.

He spent time with me,
playing pool, going for walks.
Keeping my mind off of things,
I didnt want to remember.

For this i thankyou,
you made me happy,
made life livable,
barable.

My sister loved you,
as did i.
I could see it when you were around,
the love showed in her eyes.

So this my dear brother,
Is writen in lovefor only you,
Once more i want to say,
dear brother thankyou.


R.P.I    Rodger
Always loved, never forgotten

Author notes

This is writen for one of my sisters ex's he was like a brother to me and he died from being shot,after he moved away, we didnt find out till 3 years later ... this write is lose to my heart i decided to writ it when i found apicture of him today on my favorite motorcycle...a harly daivdson shadow ... ...

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