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[ Faith should be synonimous with love. ]

Faith should be synonimous with love.
It coagulates our fears and coats it with dopemine.
With it, I am suspended above stress and strain.
With what? Shackles, a noose, a hammock?
At what price? Confidence, independence, fear?
Addicted, plain and simple
to that which keeps vanity at bay.
Let it be known
from this day forth
that Madison Rae Chamberland
will never sucumb to rehab.
Shamelessly she will wear the tracks
of a very idolistic addiction.
Humanity will need bad examples
to show their future children.

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the crappiest thing i've wrote in long time. enjoy!

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  • B00psi3
    April 24

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    Damn.
    this really spoke to me.
    it was dark but true.
    the truth tends to be the opposite of what people wanna hear.
    good write madison!

  • wow this is very intense. great write very beautiful. I love the line
    "Addicted, plain and simple
    to that which keeps vanity at bay."
    and
    "Shamelessly she will wear the tracks
    of a very idolistic addiction"

    its sad but reality. and yet funny sicne my name IS Madison. great write, very interesting.
    ~Madison~


  • Cup-a-Joe
    April 8

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    Ok Madison Rae Chamberland, again I ask are you sue you are16? This showes years more of living.
    Faith, you have to have it, be addicted to it.

    Come on give me more crap poetry. I love it.
    Joe