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goddess night

goddess night beneath your stars
hear my call, oh beauty of the night
I call forth an answer to flight
where this road shall lead me forth
along this path alighted by yours stars

destitute spread such on either side
oh goddess, beauty of the night hear my plea,
grant me wings to fly beyond the horizon
into the warming glows of pink roses,
turned to purple irises in your sky

beyond the heavens grace
where rivers lay untamed by human hands
and the trees whisper in the winds their ancient tales
of worlds long past, and journeys long taken
oh goddess of the night, hear my plea

on such a sacred journey to the spiritual
I see forth into the yonder lands
where our ancestors thrived on love
and eyes were cast up to the lovely night
to you oh goddess of the night

almost I can see,
a place where fingers grace the river side
cool kisses of the rivers love on them
such a place be true only where I linger
goddess night, shall you show me such

there among the life of the forest
wrapped in the spirits of all the life
I shall see the truth in the life I have lived
to love and hate, and know and forget
oh dear goddess of the night guide me

here where I walk along the green path
shall my soul find a mate within these trees
and the trunks of old carves heal with tears of hope
for that is what I wish to amend my dues now and before
in your hands and heart dear goddess of the night

among the sight of the evening descent
you shall lead me through this day
among this land which dreams evoke
oh goddess of the night take me here
let me skyclad dance the night away

in your company alone
beneath the blanket of stars you weave
here is where I stand in true form
warm hearted and ready to take flight
to dance with you goddess of the night

I feel your cool lips in the breeze
as feet caress the smooth stones of life
in the river untamed by days spite
this place goddess of the night
I know you are here with me every moment

once more before the night shall fall away
take me to this place so graced with lore
along the paths grown and trodden
enlightenment awaits on the other side
oh goddess of the night I am ready to fly

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  • Night FireWolf
    October 3
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    Wow. This is beautiful. Reminds me of a spell. lol.


  • Voodoo Eyes
    June 21

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    A little long, but good. This is a very good tribute to the moon. The goddess would be pleased. Thank you for entering.

  • Nice post here, a very clear coming together of thoughts and sensations to make one nice piece. I must admit the lack of punctuation and capitalisation is a hinderance, especially when it comes to line length, rythm and pace.

    I think if you were to sort that out it would bring this as a whole to the next level, and something i'd be keen to read once/if it's done.

    Thanks for the entry, best of luck in the contest


  • Fire-Fly
    April 8
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    Ah The Lady Phoenix...
    Your name is synonymous with beautiful poetry.

    As always a wonderful write.

  • I am left speechless...enchanted and so very blessed.

    Brightest Blessings~
    Az


    • EternalFyre
      April 8
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      thank you dearest sister, I hope that the goddess shall continue to lead me down such a path and show me the way

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