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Dreaming of you: Part II

Time passes by
as Loneliness settles in
(A Close and welcome friend)

I'm Staring out of windows
and all that is cliche
Dancing for you
Reaching up and grabbing onto Madness
(Also another Acquaintance)

Always too late
Our paths cross

and our lives change
Regret becomes a second skin
while reason is a distant memory

And I Realize
that love is as ever-changing
as the ocean

Sometimes Turbulent,


Never the same

Author notes

just Some Random Musings. May not make sense, but sometimes thats beauty.

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  • HorrorFiend
    September 2

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    Gorgeous and a feeling that I can strongly relate to.

    as Loneliness settles in
    (A Close and welcome friend)

    Great opening lines.

    But my favorite was Regret becomes a second skin
    while reason is a distant memory
    Wonderful write.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 25
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    It is beauty. Even better than the first.



    Mark


  • Lilian of Tilburg
    May 7
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    Very nicely done! I loved it! Thanks for the entry... Lilian


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    April 8
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    Beautiful


  • CherokeeSiren
    April 7

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    Beautiful.....just beautiful. I love it. I like the ending "Love is ever changing as the ocean" Very true.


  • Little-Buster
    April 7
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    I love the first stanza lol
    It sets the pace for the rest.
    great work!

    -Buster

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