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Oxygen Tank, Stat. Or Someone Get This Elephant Off My Chest.

you make it hard to breathe
                          [and not in a good way]
you're suffocating me with your distance, and it's killing me
but this you know, because killing me will get you everything you want
and that is exactly what you've always wanted.

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and that's exactly what you've got.
happy?

A contest entry

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  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    The title of this really made me want to read this the moment this was entered in my contest. It was unique and funny in a way. I really enjoyed your write and thank you for sharing it. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.