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Seirc Htrae

Grow tree, why try, sin dies? angel fly,
But my wings I hide, one black, one white
Seems only three things where right,
One; my life is free of light,
Two; It seems that I've lost all sight
Three; Of all things, none worth a fight

Sinful cries, all lullabies, all just lies,
I canīt cry, What's a lullaby? your word a lie,
No insight to the path of light,
One day I might,
Escape this blight.

Joy, a toy, for a boy , used in a ploy, you annoy -
Me, see, in the tree, watch him swing, hear him sing?
Oh the bliss his hanging brings,
But oh dear what could this mean?
Was there a tear in the seam?
What was that sound? I hear the screams

Oh me , oh my, the rope is tied,
The knot is tight, the time is right,
Kill the world, she only lies
But thatīs no true, she really tried,
Your ears are deaf, Earth dry your eyes,
Oh Earth, please donīt cry, Sickening boy, go and die!

Oh so, the deed is done?, you've had your fun?
The end result, they saw you hung,
And now she cries because you died,
And blamed her for all your lies, you sickening thing
Your soul wont fly, sprout wings of bone
Then to hell where you'll be tried

I loved that girl, now she's cries,
I'll kill you now, you hear her cries?
See what you've done, see how she cries?
You're forsaken and sick, she cries for you,
For you, gave up on life.

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  • Antebellum
    September 4
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    hmm..
    cant say I understand this.
    It's quite confusing.
    but thanks for taking the time to enter,
    good luck


  • dutch2lips gold member
    July 30
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    a confusing write for me, thank you for entering