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Of spring

Missing image

a wisp of
last night's
kisses dance
upon my lips,

like the taste
of morning
they remind
me of you

© Sweeney

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  • Manicmuze
    May 4
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    This is beautiful in its simplicity. A lovely piece.
    Nice,
    ~ w


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 27

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    Ahhh, the memories...the dance remains a subtle kiss upon the lips, as well. Lovely to read you again, Scribe. I was gone for awhile, then noticed about 50 of my favorites had been lost from my list... Webservers. Gotta love 'em. No choice & all.


  • February Moon gold member
    April 16
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    I really liked this.


  • Nangaleema
    April 11
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    as delicate and ethereal as the memory it describes - i like this. - Mary Jo


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 9

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    Simply sweet How lucky are you to have sweet memories to ignite your muse Lovely ~Tia


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    April 8

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    This is so blessed with romantic sensuality. Spring is a wonderful time to reflect on such beautiful things.

    Brightest Blessings~

    Azlyn

  • tara wilson gold member
    April 8
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    the taste of a spring morning, nothing better...this is beautiful, i like how you compare her kisses still on your lips, still fresh like that...


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 8

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    this is lovely; such a light touch about this one... spring in the air and on the lips, something that slowly unfolds and lingers.

    ~ Nicolette

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