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For baby alexis

Your eyes widen with surprise
your hands reaching up.
Fragile as a flower with a smile
as bright as the stars in the sky.

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For my cousins baby girl Alexis she's not old enough to reach up yet. This is just for her though.

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  • tru-luv
    April 7
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    awwww I FREAKING LOVE THIS!!!
    I love my baby girl to