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The Challenge

Tell me how you came to love me,
Tell me just how much you care.
Tell me how often you think of me,
Come steal my heart, if you dare.

Show me that your love will last,
Show me your heart will be true.
Show me that my pain is in the past,
Come make me fall in love with you.

Prove that this is til the end,
Prove you're not like all the rest.
Prove this isn't just pretend,
Come put yourself to the test.

Don't play games with my heart,
Don't make me wait too long.
Don't tear this dream apart,
Come build a love forever strong.

Stay with me thru all the many days,
Stay with me til my final breath.
Stay when others may have parted ways,
Come share a love that will outlast death.

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