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I’m not asking
and you’re not telling
these circles are killing us
and yet we spin
again and again
losing ourselves
to the lack of truth and lies
when nothing is said
well let the dance
begin

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  • Mirrors shard
    October 6
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    i like how you used the word circles, and spin, it gave the whole poem a unique sort of "spin" lol for lack of a better word