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[old grandparent] Haiku

old grandparent,
curious child –
slow walks


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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 10
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    Lovely

    picture here! Vivid...and fitting Senryu. Glad you won HM.


  • drifting cloud silver member
    April 11
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    Good work. Paints a picture in the mind.


  • Draig aine gold member
    April 9
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    CONGRADULATIONS ON THE silver

    ah I know that walk well done


  • Samplette gold member
    April 8
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    Very nice. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 7
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    I can envision this. Nice Ku!

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