collarbones
splitting skin.
sending
mental reparations
into a
five minute
high.
Author notes
11 words.
Delight by Slawa
I really like the picture, I just wish it could've been longer than 11 words haha.
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Comments
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It's like it's own drugs for all of us. Beautiful imagery.
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This is great. Thanks for entering.
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interestinggg.
this is darker than your stuff usually is
but i like it
there's just not much to say about quickies/ -
this is reallyreally good.
I love the twitchy concise feel it has to it.
just one thing: what is 'reparations?'
i don't think that's spelled right...
other than that, amazing!
*gives me shivers*
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reparations is like making amends for someting, or restoration. or something along those lines.
it's mostly used in legal terminology I think.. like to describe paying back damages.
ps. your picture is so pretty! -
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ooh, coolies. thank you!! :]
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WOW! This is an amazing write!
It really got under my skin.
And that's a good thing! :]
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thanks
I wasn't sure about this one.. so your comment means a lot
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No problem!
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