the lonely boy paddled out to sea
wonderin' when the where might be
floating on the ocean
these days-nothin's free
yeah, love, oh love
spend the day with me
we'll walk on the boardwalk
sandals on our feet
what a feelin'
what iiii'm feelin'
in my world, i'm in yours too
float across the sky
yeaheah i'll catch up to you
feel the sand
and let soak up the sun
it's all we've got
let soak up the sun
ohoowoh soak up the sun
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beautiful thoughts
another brilliant lyrical piece... Top marks again for imagery & form... Peace m-d
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nicely done
you took me and my toes,,, right to the warm sand, and ocean breeze,,,, thanks for taking my to the beach,,, it's been way tooooo long,,,,thanks again for sharing,,, ,,,,MICHAEL
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cool write...i love the beach....i love the water especially when i just let it touch my toes great job
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This sounds like a Florida girl song for sure, lots of beach and sand and sun . . . with some love thrown in for good measure. This sounds very Vron-ish too. I love that second line - fantastic. First two stanzas are my favorites. Wanna hear it sung now.
Good job again, dreamer lady!!!
Grampa Paul
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the second and third are awesome. it seems a bit different for you thou almost like a new style or maybe just refined its sick to say the least .PROPS YO
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