Tired, shower running, languidly I undress
longing for the stresses of the day to be soothed away
No-one waiting...just the beauty of my nakedness
a little background jazz, and scented candles, softly I sway
Stepping into it's pulsating flow, sighing, my blue eyes closed
the warmth of the spray hugs my curves as though it will never let go
The soft scent of Ylang Ylang fills the room
as my long elegant fingers follow the flow
feathery strokes ride the waves of my curves
surfing my sleek sensual dips
My palms slide over my stomach
pausing at my hips
Letting my hands slip slowly lower
as nature takes its course
I welcome the moisture
sliding my fingers in and out of its source
I hear the click of the door
I know he's watching...no longer alone
Caressing peaks of pleasure, soothed
with a soft sigh and a moan...
I let go...
Author notes
Anyone for a shower LMAO! 
Picture found on google images.
A contest entry
- Sensual Shower Vey Mild Erotic by theredcatjazzoflove.
900 points, ended April 13, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A MOST REMARKABLE PIECE - TO SAY THE LEAST. O, A MOST REMARKABLE PIECE, INDEED!
Letting my hands slip slowly lower
as nature takes its course
I welcome the moisture
sliding my fingers in and out of its source
I hear the click of the door
I know he's watching...no longer alone
Caressing peaks of pleasure, soothed
with a soft sigh and a moan...
You can bet your sweet backside that I was a-watching, Baby - and letting me fingers do the walking too - just like you - if you know what i mean. I had to let a monster out of me jeans - and that is all I am going to say before I put me foot in my mouth and get into HOT WATER. Because a cold shower is in order - turn the water down for this old man is jumping in! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this sensual piece that was as good as gold to me.
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Not raunchy enough where's the MOD LMAO!!!
Hop in and move closer baby Show me this monster of yours
Loved it, it's always a pleasure
to read your comments...they always make me smile.
Love you Chelle xxx
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aye aye aye! damn sugar sensual murdoes this puts you ahead of the race >>>>I welcome the moisture
sliding my fingers in and out of its source
that a girl you stil got it babe 
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Thank you hon for the gold and hosting the fab contest.
~sugar~
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Thanks hon, just had to have a go
As always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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Girl you rocked this one....I could hear the shower running, and imagine the steam of the bath...as I read. Then the magic of him watching ,,,awesome....an excllent write...of sensual beauty...novy
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Thank you novy as always for your wonderful comments
~sugar~
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Perfecto
Oh your such an amazing writer my friend
Sensually this is top class, its beautiful
Softly flowing.. what a shower
Best wishes Julie
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Glad you enjoyed Julie
As always your comments are valued and appreciated.
~sugar~
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Nice & Easy
You have got me tepid... "No-one waiting...just the beauty of my nakedness
a little background jazz, and scented candles, softly I sway"
One of the nice things about coming home to an empty house is that one can get naked without anyone laughing.
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LOL!!! Appreciate you reading
Always a pleasure. ~sugar~ 
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