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Miss Poseidon

Spontaneous desires
struggled to be freed
terrible deeds to be done
through her power of the seas.

Ignorance shadows through
but no one will uphold
the glory of defeating
the poison in her soul.


Author notes

- 45 minutes [roughly]
- 10-50 words
- readable fonts/backgrounds
- left aligned
- points will probably be added [depending on turn out.]

Credit picture: prompt: poison by sinya @ deviantart

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  • Hebz
    June 7

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    WOW, very good one

    thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Hebz

  • short but powerful.


  • Mariana gold member
    April 7
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    Great take on the prompt.

    Mariana

  • This is excellent.
    I especially like the line "ignorance shadows through".

    Great job and good luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 7
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

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