what is love
is love a thing
or is love heart brokeing
but love is in your heart
everytime you have a feeling thats love
thats why love is here
so dont hate love
A contest entry
- Show Me Your Heart. by Fire-Fly.
400 points, ended April 12, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FOUR LETTERS...L O V E :) by Roxy Rae Mae.
440 points, ends December 14, 86 entries
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Comments
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great way to describe what you are feeling
but you shouldnt uses the letter u in a poem to stand for the letters you
Good luck and thank you for entering my contest
Roxy -
What is love?
Is love a thing?
or is love heart breaking?
But love is in your heart
Everytime u have a feeling that is love
That is why love is here
So don't hate love
Nice poem Lisa! Try to find other words to describe what you are writing about. Other then a few grammatical errors, you need a really nice job!
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I think we all ask our self this ? so many times...I really liked how you explaniened it for me Love seems to be heart breaking
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Love is something mankind will continuously question.
The wisdom of love, the reasons behind love, the possibility of it or the probability of it.
There are no right or wrong answers there, but we'll always ask the questions.
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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