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Deal With It



your eyes have that heat
when you look at her

and I remember
when you and I
were blind with
fire and love.

 


Author notes

Dealing with it is for tourists.

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Rica
    April 20
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    I love, Emmaline! <3


  • SpeakLove93
    April 11

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    Nice Job

    This is a nice piece. Short, simple, and to the point. I like how you still fit in emotion into such a short piece. Nicely done and thank you for entering!


  • ItaloEtkin
    April 8
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    beautiful, poet.


  • Ami
    April 7
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    short and sweet
    Great Write and
    Thank you for entering
    Good Luck