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The Tree

We are two statues carved from the same wood -
a twisted tree-trunk -
beloved branches become merged;
let the vines grow around us,
let they become entwined,
mirroring our love -
beauty constant and still,
lest the Wind's will command our star-stroking branches to bend,
yet we shall not break, though our leaves are scattered;
these roots dwell deep in the ground,
twisting, twining,
threads in our knitting,
pieces in our perfect, passionate puzzle -
for eternity we shall belong to each other,
beings of the ancient Forest -
we shall give birth to Nature.

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Written for a contest with a picture prompt.

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    April 23

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    A very enjoyable piece you have penned here
    Thankyou for your entry

  • some nice images here - "star-stroking", "knitting". I like the idea of the two giving birth to Nature.

    Enjoyed your write.


  • Nickey Mouse
    April 8
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    Nice.I love it.