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De ja vous

Have you ever had the feeling
That you've been here before
That's what happened to me
As you walked through the door

And in that instant I saw
my whole life before me
I don't just mean the past
But also the now and what-is-to-be

Just as soon as it came it went
As you approached I knew: what you'd say;
that flick of your hair; the wink in your eye;
That you were mine, and I'd have to pay.

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  • rinzurajan
    April 11

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    wow...u took the prompt in the right direction...!!!

    its a really good write...loved the fact that u took the prompt right...

    good luck