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return or the Rodent

I laid my pen to rest so long ago.
I've lost alot since then.
My dreams are still in shades of grey.
So let me bring the lines again.
For friends and for myself.
The butterfly's and bleached rainbows.
I'm a forgotten poet, my friends are all ghosts.
With these lines i dream of life.

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ive been away... might post the things i have written while i was gone

dont you wish i had something new to say?

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  • relatable

    seems kinda like how ive been lately...


  • Melodies
    April 28

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    Hello, Nick! I am taking your poem to post onto Poetry Planet, so others may be inspired to write poetry, too. So glad to see your poem!

  • I like this. It has a tragic feel. Please do post more things. I've always enjoyed your writing. And welcome back.

  • very honest write. it really describes the loss we sometimes feel. in a way it is a beautiful write.