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sometimes I dream
in colour
and other times
I don’t dream at all

it’s always the nights
when I’m running
into your arms that

    wake me up

because a part of me
remembers
(somehow)
the truth

 

 

 

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  • Reanna Eryn
    April 13

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    This is so beautiful. I thought you were going to say "sometimes I dream in color, but otherwise, I dream in black and white". This inspires me to write some more. Good job. Beautiful.


  • Nangaleema
    April 11
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    this felt effortless - like a thought. a joy to read.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 7

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    you have such meaning behind each word you use in each of the pieces i have read so far. im always looking forward to see what you write next.


  • charcoal
    April 7
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    i like it


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 7

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    Wow, I can relate to this sooo much. Beautiful word choice and expressive, deep and personal write.

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