Swirling steam trails
from floating clouds
In remembrance of
warm, spring rains
long since forgotten.
While joyless memories
dissipate with fading
rainbows in the mist
and regret of the past
weighs heavy on the soul.
Author notes
35 Words
In a list
A contest entry
- 35 words to make me feel something. by Beautiful Irony.
400 points, ended May 15, 2009, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
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we all have regrets of past but reading your words isnt one of them thats 4 sure
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Great imagery and emotion. I love it!
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The vocabulary of this was just beautiful.
Great job
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Oooh, nice! I absolutely love "regret of the past weighs heavy on the soul," because it's so true, and this is a really good piece. I like all of the descriptions that you use, but particularly like the emphasis on "joyless memories." This is good work, great job,
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What an exellent piece of poetry you have penned.
It's wonderfully written with poignant thought.
Truly heart felt indeed.
Be blessed in all you do.
Tony
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"fading rainbows".... how sad.....
I love the phrases you used in this pen....
amazing!
becc
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