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To Simplicity

 

 

Hmm, I'm quite fond of complex,

where hair rips out in frustration,

when giving up seems viable,

 

but something about

the contradiction we share

just... just... just...

 

Your beauty silences the poets,

my God,

     

       my God. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • second-born
    April 19

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    this is so wonderful...heartfelt, powerful, simple, wise and most of all very true...God is so beautiful that no words could describe His beauty...we simply look in awe...God bless and congrats on the HM!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 12

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    Humm..you are very near to the truth..just one next knock will put you in..wonderful and original thought..well done..