Fragments of memories float swiftly by,
soaked with the waters of regret.
New hope washes to the shore line,
drenching the hope of a new day on tomorrow.
What did you think
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Oh my my! I really liked this one more than anything, i like how you used a river as you're metaphor. and hope does get lost but sometimes it seems to find it's way back. Great penning sis Ciara
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wow. um.. that was amazing! your words just wove themselves together, it was seamless, and so beautiful. I really liked this, poems that are short yet very profound always amaze me, such a great write of hope.
~Michaela~
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wow i like that. the glimpse of hope and before it the more forbidden subject of regret from the past. im always impressed with short works that express such meaning. good write!
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Amazing Work:
I love this. It makes me smile. It's poetic, brilliant and it filled with so much emotion. And you delivered your idea in such a poetic, outstanding way. I'm applauding. Bravo! Please, please keep writing. Thanks so much for sharing.
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my dear you flatter me way to much..... But hey do you think they are book worthy?? lol
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Short but succinct , another
flawless gem of a write thank you !!
Best wishes , Friend Easy
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I really do love short powerful writes, which you seem to have a natural talent for. Beautiful use of imagery in this poem. I love how you leave the reader full of hope for the 'new day' of tomorrow.
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loved this... and great title!
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Thank you dear!!
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great write
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It is always trajic when all hope is lost. There is a lot of emotion in this short poem. Very nicely done.
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