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A Delicate Promise

Missing image
lying silent and still,
I watch the amber rays
spread across the fields
as daylight caresses all

wishing upon wish
that the thousands of stars;
now hiding behind
a curtain of clouds,
remember their promise
to keep my secrets locked away

and while golden petals
kiss my cheek ever so gently
I'll pretend that my innocence
has not been shattered.

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inspired by contest image "taste of spring" by vampire zombie

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  • poet2angels gold member
    April 10

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    This is beautiful and so very touching

    "
    and while golden petals
    kiss my cheek ever so gently
    I'll pretend that my innocence
    has not been shattered."

    excellrnt poetry

    Lynda