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Family

A mother and a daughter need
Each other to make life a breeze
As their relationship grows like trees.


A father and a daughter need
Each other for life to make sense
As they protect each other like a fence


This is what makes a family

What a family truly needs
Is each other to make one giant piece
That belongs in this puzzle of life.

But what happens when you take a knife
And ruin this huge piece in life?

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 18

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    Ah yes indeed, when a mother kills her children (or indeed v.v.) this is a major problem in familial relationships. I speak from sad knowledge here as a friend of mine killed her son with a kitchen knife.

  • Ohmigod

    This is wow...it makes sense, and I abosultely love it. Good job!