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she spoke - they knew.



her lisp spoke syllables,
unregistered and fearless
to illustrate understanding;

words are but letters,
littered in lexicon to allow readers,
to linger on responsive words.

this is talk of the century.

Author notes

prompt - mouthwords


a little weird, but hey.


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  • Polaja Greeters member
    April 7

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    I loved the first line - it was perfect for setting up the rest of the poem, and it is just an awesome image the rest of it was a little weird like you say, but I think that it works together well to make a great poem!



    Polly