I let it be known that I hate him,
And I know he believes it's true.
We fight,
We argue,
I tell him I wish he would just disappear.
So I would never have to look at him again.
What he dosn't know is that I want to be next to him.
To feel his warmth on my skin.
He had me at his loud mouth,
And sly intoxicating smile.
A contest entry
- What We Don't Say by char13.
700 points, ended May 7, 2009, 33 entries
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Comments
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good job so raw
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Very nice. My favorite part is his 'sly toxicating smile smile.' Though I would only include one 'smile'. Also this is so about Doublestack MD. Love it!!!!
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No!!!! It is not you jerk and any way you have no proof.
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"Smile smile?"
I guess this is the saddest thing to ever happen- for the other person to think that you mean everything *but* what you really mean.
This is short and to-the-point, and it packs a punch. Good job.
Thank you so much for your entry and all the best to you!
♥ Char -
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Thank you for your comment I'm sorry about the double smile typo.
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No problem
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