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Lying in hate

Envy, hatred, anger
burning
Lying lonely, restless
yearning
Set in darkness, only
seeming
Frantic, find me alone and
screaming
Dreams are broken, fearing
fate
Absent truths, burdened
hate

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Written March 4th, 2004

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  • feldspaths
    March 4, 2004
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    condensed, concise and precise. i like it.