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i need my space-haiku

lost in cyber space

looking for the space station

my moon in the...john

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

        

 

 

 

 

 

 

                             

Author notes

Which makes me wonder, "What happens to all the waste the astronauts make when in space?"
Guess we'll find out one day when we're pelted with an "asturdroid" from outer space!

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  • Wisdom 1
    November 6
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    goo

    good


  • Barry Hodges
    September 23

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    Maybe I'm not fully awake but I simply didn't get this at all. I suppose it's the toilet version of the Milky Way.... found in the vicinity of Uranus I believe.


    • adios muchachos gold member
      September 23
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      Ha Ha

      This is about all I know about ASS-TRONOMY!

      Thanks for coming by.

      John


  • alexluvsglitter
    September 16

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    Ha ha ha. This was funny. Very cute poem about unusual subject matter.


    A. R. Rodriguez


  • poetryality silver member
    August 26

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    I once heard that astronaunts go to potty in their pants and it doesn't stink. I can't imagine. LOL You make it all seem possible. You are such a nut! Were you the comedian in your class? I loved this but hated the thought.

    Love YOU ♥

    Renee

    • adios muchachos gold member
      August 27
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      Hi Renee

      I think to be the class comedian you had to have a certain number of days present, and I did not qualify for it, nor anything for that matter!

      Remember your quote about how it takes a lot more facial muscles to frown than it does to laugh? Well, I subscribe to that myself!LOL

      Love,
      John


  • lovlilmystery
    August 26

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    hum. it does make one wonder.

    I like the haiku. Kind of makes one, think about what happens, to all that stuff the astronauts do. LOL. Like you say, we just might find out one sunny day. I am fairly new, to this website and would like, for you to check out my poems. Please, when you do, leave me a comment. This way, I know in which direction, I should go with future poems.

    Take care, have a great day.

    lovlilmystery

  • tessa poetry
    August 25
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    funny poem and saying how do you think of these things

    hi I love the background that you put on this and the words totally describe it.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    August 14

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    this is great. Thanks for the laugh! Thanks so much for entering my haiku contest. It's a pleasure reading your fine work


    • adios muchachos gold member
      August 14
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      Thank you very much

      I don't do these a lot, but the few I did do were fun!

      John

  • A B

    A lot of people have returned to read this. I think it has something to do with
    "space-lag"!LOL
    Well, thanks then 2X!
    I just realized that they did indeed have a toilet problem with the
    current mission!LOL

    Thanks again for your note.

    John


  • ahhhhhhh a place to rest and read
    where the mind never sleeps
    but the words that graced our soul
    on the paper the words are told
    awesome and well said dear one hugs Angel♥

    lol I have read this before
    no wonder I am back again
    the points were given last time
    Hugs♥

  • Superb Plus

    I love the wry sense of humor in this write. You have expressed your thoughts quite well, indeed. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • EMOverlord
    July 1

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    hahaha I love it, especially the author's notes that you wrote. It's very rare that I can find a good poem that can make me laugh.

    -- EMOverlord

    • Thanks a lot!

      I don't mind if people like my comments over the poem!LOL
      Thanks for taking a look at this and leaving a note. Muchly appreciated!

      John


  • Tzipora
    June 1
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    ha, nicee write

  • LMAO! I've only been on your page a split secon and you've managed to split my sides. Not only with this poem but the author note as well.

    • Hi Gypsy

      Yes, we should carry umbrellas whenever those astronauts are up there working!
      Glad you liked this, thanks.

      John- Nevada USA

  • LOL...alby

    • Thank you Alby!

      Just a coincidence I wrote this when the new Star Trek hit the theatres?
      I'll never tell !

  • Wisdom 1
    May 5
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    wonderful

    soothing snailthumb as the speaking picture. keep penning poet.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    May 4
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    What happens in outer space -
    stays in outer space -
    I hope.
    Joe


  • klassy lassy
    April 28
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    ...ahem! I'd be a little worried about johns in outer space.

    • Hi

      Seems light years since I've seen you!
      Not to worry about the "johns"! They have robot rest room attendants. You needn't tip them either!

      Nice to hear from you. Hope all is well with you and yours.

      John

  • love this ..made me laugh awesome write dear one..Hugs Angel♥

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