Notes of a lover…
People, people please hear this plea;
A treasure is the day thick like this.
Will not we wheel around with will and zest
Taking tips timing with pleasure,
Lived labored and longed long enough?
Roses red or reddish spell love’s reply.
By mouth sell sweet softened syllables.
Like little lovely lilies on valley’s bed
Spread flat, friendly and faithful: to each other be!
I had had hundred hardcore lectures on love,
A truth thus thumped timely in my heart:
Love’s call cold or comic is but CODELESS…
Please tell me what you think
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Dropping in after long while to read ...and find this little free verse delightful, wise and personally full of hope...Romance and true love is yours you are confident, and as you word it so well it is Codeless....Rest assured it will be yours, and with God on your side it will be a lifetime...
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Thank u for the comments
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Lovely Poem
Hello Dear Brother, You have penned a lovely poem on love and how it can be. Sometimes we have to love many to find the right one, and other times our true love comes along right away. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. Take care, Sissy Sandy 
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Thank u sisy. Be blessed!
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granny likes this a lot. this is a piece written straight from the heart. when love comes calling you want it to be from the right caller. this has much passion and makes my eyes teary.
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Thank u granny for passing by. God bless u
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What a wonderful write you have here, wonderfully written very good flow of words and it was a pleasure to read.
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I am glad that u liked it. Have a good day friend.
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Wonderfully Beautiful!
Ah, my dear brother, it is so good to see a new poem by you! It has been a long time for me, since I just came back here a few months ago. Much has happened, an ongoing nightmare for me, but God is ever with me!
This is such an exquisite poem, which is no surprise when they spill from your golden quill. A beautiful poem of love, to which I would honor with GOLD were it in a contest!
Much love & hugs, SisBon 
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Thank u sissy Bonnie. I will send u a detail email. God bless u
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You will know when you find Mr. Right. Always believe in your dreams and have a faith in God. And one day your hopes and dreams will come true. All my dreams came true because I believe.
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