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Marriage

While watching you sleep
I pulled off your pajamas
& did the side stroke.

I knew it was wrong,
but 'this' really helps me get -
- into character.

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Written March 4th, 2004

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  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 23, 2005
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    Lol!!! Thanks for this!!! Hahahahaha!!!

    Love and light,
    Lencio

  • Ankeeta silver member
    July 23, 2005
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    ooooooooooops


  • Madison Attitude
    April 29, 2004
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    Sweet


  • cvillelisa
    March 9, 2004
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    oh look how funny. 69 reads.
    morning.


  • March 5, 2004
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    Yes, you see I have this weird thing where I'd love it if someone ever did that to me. But anyway, you don't want to know about that. Nice ku's made me smile.

    QN


  • horus8 gold member
    March 4, 2004
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    I got your package, I'm just amazed, if I wasn't coming down with the flu, I'd cry, but I already am, so... I love you bobo, thank you, everything was just perfect.
    Edited on Mar 05 because ''.


  • cvillelisa
    March 4, 2004
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    good night....i'm tired.


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 4, 2004
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    married people single sex

  • cvillelisa
    March 4, 2004
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    perfect. can it ever really be wrong when done for the sake of art and making the world a more beautiful place? i don't know. haikus just work as foreplay for me. can't quite explain the connection. sigh.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    March 4, 2004
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    Dirty lil' nephew..!!! you should be ashamed of yourself.. ahem.. maybe not??? excuse me, whilst I sit in the ice bucket!!
    ~GILL~xxx


  • catz Moderators member
    March 4, 2004
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    Lol.... go for it, Jerimy...I would

    Nice piece...(pun intended

    Dee


  • poetryality silver member
    March 4, 2004
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    lol, I feel you, this could me tonight!


  • Nyx Iscariot
    March 4, 2004
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    im not quite sure what to make of this.

    it gives me two ideas, both of which are "taboo" and of which im not even going to 'go there'.

    another is good morning sex.

    Nyx...

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