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Love Again?

i got hurt so bad
it can't happen again
i can't fall in love
look how rough it has been

you called today
i haven't seen you in a while
but now we have plans
and i have to smile

i jumped up and down
in pure delight
but as i think bout it
i have a fear tonight

my hearts been broken
not once but twice
what would happen
if it was broken a thrice?

i think that your different
but so were the ones before
and didn't i vow not to
open my hearts door?

but when i think of you
i wear a stupid grin
and when i see you
i have a warmth within

i love your hugs
the way you arms wrap round
i never want to let go
i love how you talk and sound

i feel myself falling
it may be too late
will you catch me?
you control my fate...

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  • carebear123
    April 11

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    i like this very much!! i was impressed by the rhymes you used. some of them i would have never thought of. it sends a really good message to. one that people can relate to. lots of people have been in a situation where they fall in love and cant help it no matter what went on before. i am this way lots of times too. i thought this was a very nice write!=)


  • Ami
    April 10

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    I love it!
    "i think that your different
    but so were the ones before
    and didn't i vow not to
    open my hearts door?"

    I liked how you linked this one to "You Promised"
    and the ending is Awsome

    "i feel myself falling
    it may be too late
    will you catch me?
    you control my fate..."

    -♥Amanda♥