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haiku

midnight --
an empty path,
an unlocked door.


night sky --
among so many stars,
granny's story.


this rainy evening
the puddles are alive --
flickering car-lights.


midnight --
on a corner of the street,
her moonlit house.


a devil's eye?
or ice-cream on a cone?
the half-moon tonight.

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