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poetic perspective

Time is certain,
with everyday progression
bringing major change's
in it's wake
tick, tock...
another forgotten
second
mind, body 
and soul
bare this impending
fate
caught in time's
worm hole of 3d
dimensions
as awhirl wind of color
spins around my face
the world simple becomes
a scene of depth hue's and
shade









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