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Forget Half-Empty

And all I see is what can kill me
This world is a dangerous place
Everywhere around, it surrounds
Death on every corner, never trust foreigner
Paranoia and disdain, hardly even sane
The glass is dry, forget half-empty
Everyone is a cheat, a liar, dressed in sheep's attire
Pessimistic and sneering, nothing worth cheering
What's this about selfless acts? I don't believe in that crap!
No good in the world, just selfishness unfurled
You're all blind by pretty stories
I doubt your motives to ever be good-hearted
I trust no one since my ignorance departed
There are no saviors, only fame-chasers
Heroes don't exist to assist
They act dominant to gain a title more prominent
Scornful and negative, I bleed skepticism
I scoff at pretensions of integrity and optimism
Forget this world, you are all self-serving scum
I am a cynic; unlike you, I'm not dense nor dumb.

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  • Wow

    This is a very powerful piece, emotion throbbing with every word. You're not afraid to use words that might go over-the-top, because it fits the emotion perfectly.

    "Everyone is a cheat, a liar, dressed in sheep's attire
    Pessimistic and sneering, nothing worth cheering"

    Love that part
    Keep writing thanks for entering, and best wishes


  • awannabepoet
    April 20

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    Driving that nail into the Stigmata

    I must say that I have found what it is that I seek, someone who has not fear of the masses for knowing that the power resides within the one who looks out and sees things for what they really are.

    "Everyone is a cheat, a liar, dressed in sheep's attire
    Pessimistic and sneering, nothing worth cheering
    What's this about selfless acts? I don't believe in that crap!
    No good in the world, just selfishness unfurled"

    Let it be said that humanity is a blight on this here unholy earth for so long as a footprint is made on that pristine sand and thoughts run like a river there will be the signs that mankind has descimated every living thing it has ever spoiled.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • great work on this piece you expressed the meaning and definition well also giving beauty in a unique cynical way to the piece


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 18

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    Very bitter and cynical which is what I was looking for. well done on this. very impressive. especially liked

    I scoff at pretensions of integrity and optimism
    Forget this world, you are all self-serving scum

    you said it well


    emmyb

  • Some good reasons, I suppose. Maybe give the world the benefit of the doubt?

    • haha, im not a cynic in any means. quite the opposite really. i just wrote it in that point of view.

  • this was was really good, it fit the prompt pretty well, and was really opiniotive and well written. thanks for entering and keep writting

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