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Bread and Butter Girl

She's a bread and butter girl
Clad in ribs and rags
Never had much of nothin'
But a smile on her face

She went to school filthy
'Cause mama was a maid
Came home to empty cubbards
Struggling on minimum wage

She's a bread and butter girl
Clad in ribs and rags
Never had much of nothin'
Still, the world is a beautiful place

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  • Lowell Poe
    October 21

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    Love this lass....
    gritty well written poetry.
    like a cork screw to me heart gypsy,
    She's a bread and butter girl

    ..Clad in ribs and rags
    Never had much of nothin'
    But a smile on her face.

    Money can't by ya luv,
    fantastic message,
    Liam