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Soul Searching

If I were to leave here tomorrow
And leave everything behind.
Would you be the one to let me borrow
Your heart till it was one with mine?
Because without you I'm hollow
And sorrow is not far behind.
Darling, you know if you lead I will follow
And be with you till the end of time.

And each morning that I wake up
And start the day anew.
Don't you know the first thing on my mind
Is always and forever you.
Because I'm entranced by way you say,
And I'm in love with everything you do
So, darling, I really want you to know
That I'm so in love with you!

So when I leave here to follow
My heart till it finds thine.
Would you be there tomorrow?
So that they could intertwine.
Cause you know you take away my sorrow,
and you make me smile all the time.
Darling, I'm already yours
And I want so much for you to be mine

Author notes

I wrote this about a girl that I am so in love with. I want to show here this but parts I still find kinda cheesy and I think I could say more. But its a work in progress.

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  • i think she will melt as this one anthony its from the heart and girls love that .. i thort it was damn sweet myself cheers glenn

  • i like this poem u show a lot of feeling in it that makes it loving and reel to us that we could feel it to i get what ur saying in it to i love it


  • carmel apple
    April 22

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    Anthony1! this was so amazing and sweet and to the point.. good grief.. my friend just got engaged and this made me think of her getting engaged..
    Nice write!!

  • Awww

    Anthony, this is sooo sweet! ur love and devotion practically jump off the words... amazing write. i hope whoever she is she feels the same