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Your sunshine =]

Even if it's cloudy now;
you know I'll always be your sunshine.
When it rains and your all alone
I'll be sure to make a rainbow to see your smile.

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  • Megan Awesome
    April 7

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    Aw this is so sweet! I feel this way about Chris. Like I would do anything to make him happy. I like the weather references, like it's cloudy but you will be the sunshine, it's raining but you'll make a rainbow. Very good poem.
    Megan


    • de-ja-vu
      April 7
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      Yeah Sunshine is the nickname he gave me
      He's the core inspiration for this poem =]