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Stagnant


Time doesn't pass
in circles

and it is not communicated
in sign language.

It is not
fixed, or
manageable, or
tangible, or
coxed.

It is merely a vague word
placed on the way
things change.

Everything slowly shifts and
discretely erodes,
but nothing ever leaves.

It all sits
stagnant
and connected.



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  • teddybare gold member
    May 22

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    oh the thin veil of duality

    good write interesting insight.. i see you've spelunked a rabbit hole or two in your time


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 14

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    now thats more me , time is a decimal place in the universe. we put emphasis on it so as to count our days but it doesnt really exist its countless cheers bro i like that one


  • oldschoolhero gold member
    April 11

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    the tones too sad for something which amazes me so much

    nevertheless, i like your writing style

    !!


  • Antebellum
    April 9
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    I love the ending.!!

  • you have an incredible way with words. you take time and make it seem simple... is that because it really is or because it isn't... wonderful piece.


  • Metaphorist
    April 7
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    Perfect!


  • Ealdwyne
    April 6
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    Perception is everything is it not?

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