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who?

I'm that girl.
You know?

The one who will stay up all night on a horror movie marathon and not be phased
But screams when the toaster pops in the morning.

The one that loves to play dress up in my formal dresses
but also loves to dress in sweats and my brothers base ball cap.

I'm the Angel on Earth.
Even with my devilish charm.

I like it when no one's around.
I Hate to be alone.

Am I a miracle?
Am I a curse?

Am I up?
Am I down?

I am typical,
In that I'm unique

I'm just me and theirs nothing I can do to change it.
I'm not really sure if I even want to try.

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  • some real self disclosure in this write. thank you for sharing this with me today and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie

  • Oh this was an enjoyable read... many of us ...almost all ...are confused as to what their nature is actually like . Many can relate themselves to this write of yours ... thanks for sharing it ... and very well-penned.


  • GoOnDream
    April 21
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    This is good. :D

    I like this too. We all are unique in our own way. Some varying.


  • Desdmona
    April 17

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    I really enjoyed this and related to this. The oxymorons were so real and I think there are oxymorons within us all. So good job and good luck! ~Des

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