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Wind

Wind blows the evergreen,

twisting it to and fro.

Trees bend to its’ unseen strength,

helpless to its’ power.

For it is free and wild,

un-tethered to the ground below.

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  • wishintreeUK
    October 26

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    Reading this brought back a holiday I took in BC Canada a few years ago, the first line of the poem espacially reminded me of the smell of the pines that was so very evident wherever I went. The trees are so majestic and have a beauty and strength of their own that would take some beating. Free and wild is a very apt description.

    Well done, I did enjoy reading this and the recollection of a personal experience.

    Katie

  • meena krish
    June 1

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    I like nature poems and reading this made me smile.
    The description of the wind & its strength was
    nicely written...good job


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 31

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    Perfect

    description! With a 'lil tweaking here & there you might have a nice Haiku here. Ever write those? You have all the elements here. I'll send you something. Nice feel to this.

  • goalsv
    April 7
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    Nicely stated, a pefedt discription showing the winds strength and mystery. Very well done.

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